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Write a first-use guide people can finish

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The first-use guide has one job: help someone complete a useful action with the product they just opened. It does not need to explain every feature or tell the company’s whole story. Before writing, choose the action that will make the product understandable. A guide becomes easier to edit when you can point to a specific finish.

For a small task application, that finish could be creating a task and sending it to a reviewer. For a physical desk organizer, it might be placing the parts correctly and storing the first group of items. Choose the action for the actual product. Pick something the customer actually came to do, then write the guide around the conditions required to do it.

Define the reader’s starting point

Write down what the person has already done when the guide appears. Have they opened an account? Unpacked all the parts? Connected a device? Those assumptions determine the first instruction. A guide that starts halfway through setup can feel broken even when every sentence is clear.

List what the person needs before beginning. Keep the list limited to real prerequisites: the correct account access, a part from the box, or information they must have on hand. If a requirement is optional, identify it as optional. Do not let a long preparation checklist become a hiding place for features that belong later.

Also decide where the guide will be read. A printed card has different space and update constraints from an in-app panel. Someone using a phone may need to switch between the guide and the product. Test that movement. Instructions that are easy to read on a large monitor may become awkward when the next step disappears behind another screen.

Write the finish before the introduction

Complete the sentence “You are finished when…” in concrete terms. In the task application example, the finish is that the reviewer can see the task and its current document. “Your workspace is ready” sounds positive but leaves several possible meanings. A visible result makes it easier for the customer and the writer to know whether the guide worked.

Use that finish to decide what belongs in the guide. A profile photo may personalize the account, but it is not required to send a review request. Reporting features may be valuable later, but explaining them now interrupts the selected action. Put those topics in separate help material that remains easy to find after the first success.

The introduction can then be short and specific: this guide helps you send your first task for review. Follow it with any prerequisite that could otherwise cause a failure. Save background explanations for the point where they help the reader make a decision.

Give every instruction an actor and an action

Use direct verbs and the same labels the person sees in the product. If the button says “Create task,” do not call it “Start a project” in the guide. Those may mean different things to a first-time user, even if the team treats them as interchangeable.

Digital.gov’s plain-language writing guidance recommends language suited to the audience and explains how active voice clarifies who does what. Apply that advice by naming the action and, where necessary, the responsible person. “Choose a reviewer” gives a clearer next step than “Reviewer selection is required.” Keep specialized terms only when the reader needs them, and explain them where they first appear.

One numbered step can contain a short explanation, but it should have a clear stopping point. If the step asks the reader to move between three screens, split it at a natural boundary. Conversely, separate steps for every tiny pointer movement can make a straightforward action feel longer than it is. Use the product’s actual sequence to decide where the breaks belong.

Build a worked guide

Here is an illustrative outline for sending a first review request. It is a writing example, not instructions for an existing GoBasic.com application. The product labels are proposed labels that a team would need to confirm against its own interface.

First, open Tasks and choose Create task. Name the task with the work and the decision needed, such as “Review the September client update.” The result of this step should be a saved draft that the writer can recognize later. If drafts do not save automatically, the guide must say when to save.

Second, add the current document link. Explain which link to use and remind the writer to check that the reviewer can open it. A task can look complete while its attachment is inaccessible. The guide should direct the user to verify the permission that matters, rather than merely celebrating that a link was pasted.

Third, choose the reviewer. State that this is the person responsible for checking the work. If the reviewer needs an invitation before appearing in the list, give the necessary instruction here. Do not make the reader search a separate chapter to understand why the expected name is missing.

Fourth, select Send for review. Explain that this action changes the task’s state and notifies the reviewer if that is the actual product behavior. Show the confirmation the user should expect. Finish by asking the user to open the task and confirm the reviewer and current document are visible.

That outline gives the writer a sequence to test. It also exposes product questions: do drafts save, can access be checked, and does the action send a notification? Resolve those questions before polishing the sentences. Clear writing depends on knowing what the product actually does.

Explain the likely interruption

Choose the failure most likely to prevent the selected action and address it near the relevant step. In the example, the reviewer may be missing from the list or unable to open the file. Explain how to recover without making the entire guide a troubleshooting directory.

For forms and software controls, W3C’s notification guidance describes the need for understandable success and error messages with information that helps people correct mistakes. A guide should use the same vocabulary as those messages. If the product says a save failed, the guide should not imply that leaving the page will safely preserve the change.

Put less common problems in linked help material with descriptive labels. “Add a missing reviewer” is easier to choose than “Advanced support.” For a physical product, an illustration of the correct part orientation may solve a recurring issue more directly than another paragraph. Verify the illustration against the actual item and keep labels readable at the size people will see.

Test understanding through action

Give the guide and the product to someone who has not helped write either one. Ask them to complete the selected action. Let them work without narrating the answer. When they pause, record where they looked and what they expected. A writer’s helpful explanation during the test can hide the exact defect the guide needs to fix.

After the task, ask the person to describe what happened and what remains to do. For the review example, ask who can see the task now and who acts next. Completion without that understanding may leave the user unable to repeat the process tomorrow. A comprehension check should reveal the person’s mental picture, not test their memory of a sentence.

Keep a short revision log: the observed problem, the likely cause, the change, and what to check next. If a label was confusing, patch that label and the neighboring instruction. If the product sequence was broken, send the issue to the product team. Rewriting the entire guide after every session can introduce new mistakes while making the original problem harder to track.

Keep the guide attached to the product

Give someone responsibility for updating the guide when the interface, contents, or setup requirements change. Store the product version or review date with the working document. A once-clear guide can become misleading after a button moves or a package loses a component.

Your next step is to draft the finish, the prerequisites, and the shortest complete sequence for one useful action. Test it with a new user and watch the action through to its visible result. The best evidence is a person who can finish, explain what happened, and repeat the action when they need it again.

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